3.10.16

Let It Burn

Everytime you cry,
something within me dies,
your loneliness, your pain,
is part of my heart’s terrain.

Don’t be afraid to love again,
allow to burn love’s flame,
let me hold you in my arms,
and shower love charms.

Floating together to horizon,
we’ll see our love rising,
heaven will witness our pledge,
and we’ll find our own planet’s edge.


16 comments:

  1. Ah, lovers. Drift off to your dreams

    ReplyDelete
  2. So much love in this... and the rhymes work so well strengthening the message.

    ReplyDelete
  3. What a wonderful promise of love.

    ReplyDelete
  4. Love the tension and drama created in this -- the pain and bliss of love both realistic and fantastical -- indeed, I do love a good fantasy that ends with "love rising." The picture fits perfectly. Thanks for sharing.

    ReplyDelete
  5. Oh, Vandana, I am in sync with this. Sounds like you may have been too. At first I had a plan B ready, now trust and love have replaced thoughts of alternatives.
    ..

    ReplyDelete
  6. The beauty of love, the intimacy of spirits joined. Lovely

    ReplyDelete
  7. A cosmic 'Very time we say goodbye' blues poem. The phrase 'heart's terrain' is beautiful.

    ReplyDelete
  8. Wonderfully uplifting write!❤️

    ReplyDelete
  9. Ah the promise of love, so enticing. Nice one Vandana

    much love...

    ReplyDelete
  10. Love the idea of showering love charms. :-)

    ReplyDelete
  11. lovers do live in a world of their own..

    ReplyDelete
  12. So sweet. So ephemeral. ..love it!

    ReplyDelete
  13. I so enjoyed the rhymes in this and all the love. Lovers exist in their own world for sure.

    ReplyDelete
  14. Don’t be afraid to love again,
    allow to burn love’s flame,
    let me hold you in my arms,
    and shower love charms

    Love the rhyming in this Vandana! And making everyone feel so young!

    Hank

    ReplyDelete

Thank you for flying by. I appreciate your honest and critical comments.