26.8.17

Me And The Moon


In the calmness of night
my thoughts take a flight

I gaze at the milky moon
and float in a swoon

reaching to the great white orb
my soul’s absorbed

aura of this great pearl
sweeps me in swirls

my thoughts are frore
but ,I am whole

                                                                

14 comments:

  1. I wish I had your talent for verse and poetry.

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  2. The moon is a wonderful companion when you need one...

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  3. "aura of this great pearl"...A magnificent image!

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  4. I love rhyming poems! <3 Especially lovely ones like yours. Would be awesome if you changed the font colour though..pretty hard to read

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  5. Thank you for this moment.

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  6. Yes, there is something quite transcendent about staring up into the moon - it really does calm one's soul. Perhaps it is the realization (visited anew) that it is the one thing that unites humankind ... whatever our differences, we all live under the same old moon.

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  7. Ah, the magic language of the moon, a voice I need too *smiles*

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  8. Such a stellar close on this!💞 Beautifully rendered.

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  9. reaching to the great white orb
    my soul’s absorbed

    Such is the power exerted by the moon from far out!

    Hank

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  10. Luv your pearl image of the moon. I was moon viewing myself only this morning. Have a great Tuesday. Thanks for droppong by my blog today

    Much💖love

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  11. She is alluring, isn't she? The moon... that bringer of dreams and howls... and of calmer things.

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  12. I like the "great orb" and the "milky moon". I love moon poems.

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  13. This was wonderful - it's not easy to write verse, but this was great.

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