2.11.17

Secret Desires


Secret desires,
flow through,
poems,
bathing,
my flesh,
in your aroma.

As night,
descends,
with her moon,
our thoughts,
become one.

13 comments:

  1. Wow. What's not to love about these lovers? I like how you've suggested secret desires flowing through poems. This is poetry at its best, it it can leave me with the scent of my lover's aroma. Nice.

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  2. So beautifully penned. You're good at this!

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  3. Your lover's aroma - so passionate!

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  4. Beautifully sensuous write!💞

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  5. I do love these gentle desires... the flesh and aroma is tantalizing.

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  6. Beautiful...love poetry as it should be

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  7. What lovely words... reminds me of a past love ♡♡♡

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  8. Beautiful! I love the photo you chose.

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  9. So beautifully written.loved every word Vandana. Along with the photo I was transported to another place.

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  10. Well I can remember back that very feeling when my youthful thoughts werer as one with my girlfriend of the time. Thank you for the reminder of those fantastic times.

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  11. Sweet romantic piece, Vandana

    Much💖love

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  12. So much can be conveyed or aroused in poetic words. Really like the tactile-ness of the transfer of their aroma - even if only through words.

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